I wonder what are ingredients of LIFE
Is it a good family and a good wife
A mark in top league and a successful career
Or heaps of wealth and a seat of power
Though these are necessary to possess
Inarguably, life needs more as I assess
What adds spice are interests and passions
And knowledge to make interesting conversations
Friends around and kindred-ties brimming with love
Who stands by you when others shove
Though it is a fight tough and perennial
Surely life is slightly more than just the things material
:)
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Now that your are forcing me to write some comment, so here it is
Good effort :-)
But honestly, you have captured the gist of the life in the poem...
And yeah, this friend is always going to be with you in thick and thin of your LIFE...
hey bro!!really a great effort...
u ve written something very true....in a line we can say..gud pals,strong kindred-ties nd sleepy conscience;r d ideal life ingredients
and who else can experience this to the fullest...living alone...way too far from home...trying to make whatever i can of this time...am tempted to say that u took teh words outta muh mouth...awesome work bro :)
hey, thanks everyone...
:)
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